May 14, 2008

  • Simile Poems

    We started a poetry unit with our 7th graders.  I like it when I get a chance to write at school; it's the best I ever get paid to write poetry.

    The Oak Beside the Ginkgo

     

    The oak is like a strong man holding up the world;
    the ginkgo’s like a little child-- giggly and curled.

    The oak withstands the strongest wind
    with very little sway;
    the ginkgo takes the breezes
    as excuse to dance and play.

    The oak is like a father--
    protective, hard and stern;
    the ginkgo’s like a mother--
    delicate, but firm.

              5/13/08 Cheri Neuman Herald

     

Comments (5)

  • Nice!  It must be very cool for you to get to do that!

  • Hi Cheri, Long time no sea.

    Well I am still in college hanging in there. Hope you are now enjoying the friuts of your labor in college. It must be rewarding to do the work you do now. I admire you and pray for you because we truly are on the battlefiled!! With daily struggles with our kiddos.

    Have a blessed week,

    Aida

  • This looks like a fable of La Fontaine :" le chêne et le roseau " ( the oak and the reed ) .

    Well done , Cheri .

    Love

    Michel

  • I love this and bet your class thinks it's awesome.  I like that the subject matter is something you see in everyday life with a story relating to family life.  Fantasy plus reality rolled into one. 

    I love to write especially poetry but I can't seem to get it going like I used to.  Everyonce in a while something just falls out.  It will come back when it's ready.

    Loved your poem.

  • I'll bet your students love this poem as much as I do. Well done.

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