May 14, 2008
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Simile Poems
We started a poetry unit with our 7th graders. I like it when I get a chance to write at school; it's the best I ever get paid to write poetry.
The Oak Beside the Ginkgo
The oak is like a strong man holding up the world;
the ginkgo’s like a little child-- giggly and curled.The oak withstands the strongest wind
with very little sway;
the ginkgo takes the breezes
as excuse to dance and play.The oak is like a father--
protective, hard and stern;
the ginkgo’s like a mother--
delicate, but firm.5/13/08 Cheri Neuman Herald
Comments (5)
Nice! It must be very cool for you to get to do that!
Hi Cheri, Long time no sea.
Well I am still in college hanging in there. Hope you are now enjoying the friuts of your labor in college. It must be rewarding to do the work you do now. I admire you and pray for you because we truly are on the battlefiled!! With daily struggles with our kiddos.
Have a blessed week,
Aida
This looks like a fable of La Fontaine :" le chêne et le roseau " ( the oak and the reed ) .
Well done , Cheri .
Love
Michel
I love this and bet your class thinks it's awesome. I like that the subject matter is something you see in everyday life with a story relating to family life. Fantasy plus reality rolled into one.
I love to write especially poetry but I can't seem to get it going like I used to. Everyonce in a while something just falls out. It will come back when it's ready.
Loved your poem.
I'll bet your students love this poem as much as I do. Well done.
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